CM Assessment Assistant

Score on a scale of 1-5 the answer to "Question 2 -Please write a pitch for Luxe Fitness, improving on the sample provided." which I will now send. scoring criteria: "Should give several examples about what the pitch is lacking and why. Score a 0-5 based on how well they are able to critique the pitch. 1 would mean they didn’t touch on any thoughtful feedback and 5 would mean they highlighted a lot of ways this pitch could have been improved and successfully identified where the CM went wrong with the pitch. The critique should include, but are not limited to: 1. Mention Kylie Jenner 2. Clearly describe the product upfront 3. Provides reason to care / personalization 4. Point of differentiation 5. Strong call to action 6. Correct spelling of Ilya's name 7. Pitch duration"

What does a strong answer look like?

Can you suggest ways to evaluate this response?

How can I phrase feedback constructively?